“You know Mom said no boys over!”
Cheryl bristled at her sister’s rebuke. “Give me a break. We’re just going to study together.”
“I’m gonna tell Mom.”
“You’d better not,” Cheryl said as she led her guest upstairs. But she didn’t have to worry. Mandy had a copy of the key to the liquor cabinet, and their mother didn’t know.
When they reached the top of the stairs Cheryl pulled Todd into her bedroom by his wrist. They kissed, their hands fumbling with buttons, zippers and belts. Her skirt hit the floor before she reached the bed, her sweater and bra following. As Todd undressed Cheryl climbed atop the mattress and settled onto her hands and knees. Her ass wiggled in his face, daring him to come take her.
In one quick, expert motion Todd slid her panties off and buried his face in her from behind. When she could take no more his voracious mouth was replaced by his cock. One hand found the small of her back, pinning her to the bed, while the other tangled itself in her strawberry blonde locks as he fucked her without mercy.
It wasn’t until they had finished that they noticed Mandy standing in the doorway. “How long have you been watching?” Cheryl asked.
“Like, forever.”
“You’d better not say anything to Mom.”
The younger sister sauntered in, admiring the sight of pure carnality before her.
“I won’t,” Mandy said at last, “if you let me have a turn.” (247/249)
Behind the Scenes
This week's Flash Fiction Friday challenge features, for the first time, an animated gif of the sort that Ram the Sunlover so loves. Apologies if the picture doesn't render correctly; as Ram points out, Blogger users are unable to upload gifs to their posts. Unfortunately the coding Ram provided didn't work for me, and at any rate, the gif works fine on my end.
I can admit to initially having little or no idea for a story based on this image; while it's definitely an erotic bit of animation, it didn't exactly grab me or immediately inspire me to write a story. As I stared at the picture on Thursday afternoon - stared in the hopes of being inspired, not because I was masturbating or anything - I briefly considered bringing back Sylvia, Joelle, and Bill/Useless, the trio who have been the focus of three previous Flash Fiction Friday stories. Ultimately I decided against this as I couldn't imagine a set of circumstances wherein Bill is allowed to fuck one of the women without some sort of cruel, ironic twist.
When inspiration did strike, I found myself quickly typing out a quick synopsis, consisting of the following:
Guy is visiting girlfriend. (No boys allowed while parents are out.) Sister is also home. Guy and girlfriend go upstairs to fuck. Sister comes up and spies on them, watches through open doorway. Sister says she has been standing there "forever" and threatens to rat out sister to parents if she doesn't get a turn.
The requirements for this week's story included the word "...forever...", hence the deliberate inclusion of the word in the above summary. Participants were also asked to stay within a word range of between 241 and 249. As I've stated in the past, I find challenges that include a word range a bit more difficult than those that include just a maximum word limit. I always worry that I'm going to write the perfect story, have it fall well short of the minimum, and have to add a bunch of unnecessary words or even paragraphs to make it fit. But as is usually the case, this week I had no such trouble. My first draft of this story was 247 words. Upon polishing the story, removing unnecessary words and adding words that should have been included from the beginning, my final word count was, that's right, 247.
Deleted Scenes
None, although originally reference to Cheryl and Mandy's mother would have included reference to their father as well. Dad was dropped because “You know Mom said no boys over!” is two whole words shorter than "You know Mom and Dad said no boys over!"
Soundtrack
My Sister by Juliana Hatfield.
5 comments:
Gif is working great so far as I see, Jack, so maybe Blogger is crawling into the 21st century, after all!
Great story - reminds me of high school shenanigans and fantasies...
Ram
Mandy is a smart one! :-) Go Mandy! Get your turn!
Very nicely done. I didn't see these two as sisters, but you worked this very well.
Such naughty sisters! Nicely written, Jack. As always.
My word count hit 290 at one point, but then discipline kicked in and entire paragraphs were dropped. I like that part of the challenge. What can I take out and still have a story. Your 247 words were will chose. The last line was great.
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